really enjoyed this!! I didn't expect to get so much content out of it (took me an entire afternoon)
I think it's really great that you also get such wholesome interactions with the side characters. I got attached to them even though usually I just focus on the LI
(also as much as I liked sweet Mitra, my fav was Reksa even though all he did was hiss lmfaoo💀)
PLS, INI LUCU BANGET!!! I LOVE IT TOO MUCH, I'VE BEEN PLAYING THIS GAME NON-STOP. SOMEONE TAKE MY LAPTOP AWAY!!! Great job btw dear developer!! I can't wait for your next project!! And please do tell me if you already publish a game other than this, I will gladly play it!!
Aaaa, makasih, Jajajacece~ Congrats ud berhasil slesein smua route ny! Sneng rasany ad org indo yg suka >///< I'm still working on my 2nd project but it shouldn't be long now, Nusantara: Bermuda Triangle will definitely be released this year! I hope when the time comes, I'll be able to see you here again :'3 I look forward to hear your thoughts!
Amazing game even though it felt so short! I honestly would love to see a sequel at some point that expands even more lore between the two races and the return of the love interests at some point! Who knows? Maybe we might get a "small" surprise later on if it gets to that point? I'm curious to see what more you could expand on this, as well as your other game (I haven't played it so bear with me. I'm just a stickler for games like this XD). Honestly I was kind of expecting some of the storylines to not interact or intersect so much since it brought some confusion (I never visited Rama once and still managed to trigger some events that made little sense with the komodo's love choice). I'm assuming that has more than likely approved though so I'm not one to judge too bad on that. Coding can be quite a challenge when it comes to such formulas in multiple choices and how all of it interacts depending on what choices you've made to unlock certain scenarios that require a certain "checkpoint" that can require more coding. Still amazing work though!
Thank you and congrats on finishing the game, Tailbolt! Winged Ones is my first VN that I made, so I understand the flaws that you've pointed out >_< You're right in saying, coding is challenging, because I still remember the first day I learned how to change the background and it was not fun lol. Lots of trials and errors! *SPOILER ALERT* If I remember correctly, the event you're talking about is the one where Rama threaten you with a knife? or is it the one where Rama ran away & people are looking for him? the first event should be able to be avoided if you choose to visit Reksa but I could be wrong, it has been a long time so the details are fuzzy in my mind. But yes, the second event is unavoidable due to Rama's mental condition. It is both a closure and the consequence of his neglience.
In any case, I'm happy to hear you enjoyed yourself ^///^ Thank you for giving my game a chance and for dropping by to let me hear your thoughts! I hope to see you again in my next game, Bermuda xoxo,
Oh I'm playing the new one right now! By the way, if you do need a different application to make VN games, I know there is one called "VN Maker" that can be used and is available on Steam. Of course, it might be something you might have to get used to (and last I checked it might be just a little spendy. It probably has changed since I got it) but just a suggestion if you are thinking of looking for other platforms to use or try out! :3
It's hard to choose a favorite but Reksa might be my favorite, his bad end really had me in my feelings and I enjoy his kind of character (don't get me wrong though, I love all the LIs but something about guys with black hair haha, shame we don't see more of Reksa's hair down, a sight to see)
I do play a lot of otome vns, I chose to play this one because it was diferent to me and I enjoyed the artwork.
I think the best element to me was the storyline, artwork and the characters.
How come the endgame didn't come with a pair of wings for Tamara?/hj lmao, this game seriously made me crave for a avian fl haha. The song during the credits was effy to me, I couldn't understand the words, I kind of wish that on Rama's good route his sprite actually showed he took off his earring and Mitra's sprite was messy on some expressions, there was smudges past the lines and there were a fefw errors in spelling if I remember correctly-
Hi, Nameless! Thanks for sparing your time to answer my questions! Ah, Reksa is still the all time favorite I see XD And now that you mention it; Reksa with his hair down will definitely be a sight to see! I wonder why I didn't think of it sooner, I could've make a CG or two. I think he's the type that gets hotter as he gets older (He age like fine wine--I mean, look at his father).
I'm flattered that you like most of the game's elements QuQ Credits to my proofreaders who have made the story several times better! They have made my grammar so much better but somehow, I think some still managed to avoid our radars so do excuse us for that ^^;
And yes! I'm also looking forward for more fantasy VNs with winged characters or even mermaids in the future! I understand what you mean with the credits song >_< the singer is a friend of mine who despite having a good voice, lacked the needed equipment. Now he's busy with his office so unfortunately, I don't think he can find a way to re-do it.
Last but not least, thank you for your thoughtful suggestions and you even saw my sprite's flaws >_<; I must say, I sometimes gets a bit messy when coloring semi-realism style. Quality control is definitely on my list to improve.
Thanks again for dropping by & telling me your thoughts, Nameless! I'm working on my 2nd project now, Bermuda Triangle. It's not a sequel, more like a spin-off. I hope to see you again there in the future? If not, all is well! I'm already happy that people are still playing Winged Ones ^///^ xoxo,
What can I say, I like em possessive lmfao (but honestly, all three were my "type" that I enjoy romancing, Rama is a caca head though, reminded me of another character in a different vn) and yess, Silva is such a dilf haha, I would ofc choose Reksa over his dad anyday though ofc, I'm loyal pfft. But I have to say, I do love the courting system with the Avians, trust me, it was hard to choose between a predator/prey kink moment or a husband that would cook for you but not for himself cause he's too lazy and suicidal (I would love a full cg of Rama before his love of his life dies and oml, his bad end though?? Mwah, I'd comment on that but spoilerrrsss) or the bachelor you'd be a housewife with and brag about your love story to your future kids and the aunties haha, not to mention, Tamara is living in a hough that could kill her if she accidentally fell off, not the best pplace for a human unfortunately but the gesture is apprieciated (RIP those who are scared of heights)
Yes yes, I thought the game was well made, the storyline was good and it didn't have any moments where I was like "ughhhh" while reading through.
The credit song, I get that, what can ya do haha.
And don't feel bad about me seeing the flaws, it would've happened sooner or later cause I replay vns for all the endings as a completionist lmao, your vn is great even with all the little things you missed, it happens and I'll be around for the second game- if it's free haha, if it isn't then it depends on the cost TT but I'm sure that going forward you'll improve, I'm glad to have helped- I was waiting to finish the game so I could answer your questions, I love doing that.
and P.S. such a shame Rama's wings are broken, I would've loved to see how he courts Tamara at the "kissing ceremony", a tragic beauty indeed.
just want to say that I'm so glad I find this game and play it! It's sooooo good and I like it sooooo much! Currently I just finished Mitra's happy ending and I love it. Also this game gives me some insights about your culture and it's great. Thank you for creating such an amazing game!
Hi, watersimilar! You're welcome and thank you for giving my game a chance and loving it! ^///^ I'm really flattered, it's the best compliment you can ever give me <3 I hope you'll also have fun with the other routes--but no rush! Read with your own pace and maybe come again to tell me what you think~
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really enjoyed this!! I didn't expect to get so much content out of it (took me an entire afternoon)
I think it's really great that you also get such wholesome interactions with the side characters. I got attached to them even though usually I just focus on the LI
(also as much as I liked sweet Mitra, my fav was Reksa even though all he did was hiss lmfaoo💀)
PLS, INI LUCU BANGET!!! I LOVE IT TOO MUCH, I'VE BEEN PLAYING THIS GAME NON-STOP. SOMEONE TAKE MY LAPTOP AWAY!!! Great job btw dear developer!! I can't wait for your next project!! And please do tell me if you already publish a game other than this, I will gladly play it!!
Aaaa, makasih, Jajajacece~
Congrats ud berhasil slesein smua route ny! Sneng rasany ad org indo yg suka >///<
I'm still working on my 2nd project but it shouldn't be long now, Nusantara: Bermuda Triangle will definitely be released this year!
I hope when the time comes, I'll be able to see you here again :'3 I look forward to hear your thoughts!
Amazing game even though it felt so short! I honestly would love to see a sequel at some point that expands even more lore between the two races and the return of the love interests at some point! Who knows? Maybe we might get a "small" surprise later on if it gets to that point? I'm curious to see what more you could expand on this, as well as your other game (I haven't played it so bear with me. I'm just a stickler for games like this XD). Honestly I was kind of expecting some of the storylines to not interact or intersect so much since it brought some confusion (I never visited Rama once and still managed to trigger some events that made little sense with the komodo's love choice). I'm assuming that has more than likely approved though so I'm not one to judge too bad on that. Coding can be quite a challenge when it comes to such formulas in multiple choices and how all of it interacts depending on what choices you've made to unlock certain scenarios that require a certain "checkpoint" that can require more coding. Still amazing work though!
Thank you and congrats on finishing the game, Tailbolt!
Winged Ones is my first VN that I made, so I understand the flaws that you've pointed out >_< You're right in saying, coding is challenging, because I still remember the first day I learned how to change the background and it was not fun lol. Lots of trials and errors!
*SPOILER ALERT*
If I remember correctly, the event you're talking about is the one where Rama threaten you with a knife? or is it the one where Rama ran away & people are looking for him? the first event should be able to be avoided if you choose to visit Reksa but I could be wrong, it has been a long time so the details are fuzzy in my mind. But yes, the second event is unavoidable due to Rama's mental condition. It is both a closure and the consequence of his neglience.
In any case, I'm happy to hear you enjoyed yourself ^///^
Thank you for giving my game a chance and for dropping by to let me hear your thoughts! I hope to see you again in my next game, Bermuda
xoxo,
SweetChiel
Oh I'm playing the new one right now! By the way, if you do need a different application to make VN games, I know there is one called "VN Maker" that can be used and is available on Steam. Of course, it might be something you might have to get used to (and last I checked it might be just a little spendy. It probably has changed since I got it) but just a suggestion if you are thinking of looking for other platforms to use or try out! :3
I love this game and all three LI in it
Aww, thank you summernight77! ^///^
Congrats on finishing the game!
I look forward to your next project!
Thank you! Please bear with me. It's a slow but steady progress while wrestling with my dayjob! x'D
It's hard to choose a favorite but Reksa might be my favorite, his bad end really had me in my feelings and I enjoy his kind of character (don't get me wrong though, I love all the LIs but something about guys with black hair haha, shame we don't see more of Reksa's hair down, a sight to see)
I do play a lot of otome vns, I chose to play this one because it was diferent to me and I enjoyed the artwork.
I think the best element to me was the storyline, artwork and the characters.
How come the endgame didn't come with a pair of wings for Tamara?/hj lmao, this game seriously made me crave for a avian fl haha. The song during the credits was effy to me, I couldn't understand the words, I kind of wish that on Rama's good route his sprite actually showed he took off his earring and Mitra's sprite was messy on some expressions, there was smudges past the lines and there were a fefw errors in spelling if I remember correctly-
Hi, Nameless!
Thanks for sparing your time to answer my questions!
Ah, Reksa is still the all time favorite I see XD And now that you mention it; Reksa with his hair down will definitely be a sight to see! I wonder why I didn't think of it sooner, I could've make a CG or two. I think he's the type that gets hotter as he gets older (He age like fine wine--I mean, look at his father).
I'm flattered that you like most of the game's elements QuQ
Credits to my proofreaders who have made the story several times better! They have made my grammar so much better but somehow, I think some still managed to avoid our radars so do excuse us for that ^^;
And yes! I'm also looking forward for more fantasy VNs with winged characters or even mermaids in the future!
I understand what you mean with the credits song >_< the singer is a friend of mine who despite having a good voice, lacked the needed equipment. Now he's busy with his office so unfortunately, I don't think he can find a way to re-do it.
Last but not least, thank you for your thoughtful suggestions and you even saw my sprite's flaws >_<;
I must say, I sometimes gets a bit messy when coloring semi-realism style. Quality control is definitely on my list to improve.
Thanks again for dropping by & telling me your thoughts, Nameless!
I'm working on my 2nd project now, Bermuda Triangle. It's not a sequel, more like a spin-off. I hope to see you again there in the future?
If not, all is well! I'm already happy that people are still playing Winged Ones ^///^
xoxo,
SweetChiel
Greetings SweetChiel,
What can I say, I like em possessive lmfao (but honestly, all three were my "type" that I enjoy romancing, Rama is a caca head though, reminded me of another character in a different vn) and yess, Silva is such a dilf haha, I would ofc choose Reksa over his dad anyday though ofc, I'm loyal pfft. But I have to say, I do love the courting system with the Avians, trust me, it was hard to choose between a predator/prey kink moment or a husband that would cook for you but not for himself cause he's too lazy and suicidal (I would love a full cg of Rama before his love of his life dies and oml, his bad end though?? Mwah, I'd comment on that but spoilerrrsss) or the bachelor you'd be a housewife with and brag about your love story to your future kids and the aunties haha, not to mention, Tamara is living in a hough that could kill her if she accidentally fell off, not the best pplace for a human unfortunately but the gesture is apprieciated (RIP those who are scared of heights)
Yes yes, I thought the game was well made, the storyline was good and it didn't have any moments where I was like "ughhhh" while reading through.
The credit song, I get that, what can ya do haha.
And don't feel bad about me seeing the flaws, it would've happened sooner or later cause I replay vns for all the endings as a completionist lmao, your vn is great even with all the little things you missed, it happens and I'll be around for the second game- if it's free haha, if it isn't then it depends on the cost TT but I'm sure that going forward you'll improve, I'm glad to have helped- I was waiting to finish the game so I could answer your questions, I love doing that.
and P.S. such a shame Rama's wings are broken, I would've loved to see how he courts Tamara at the "kissing ceremony", a tragic beauty indeed.
xoxo
Yours truly, Nameless
just want to say that I'm so glad I find this game and play it! It's sooooo good and I like it sooooo much! Currently I just finished Mitra's happy ending and I love it. Also this game gives me some insights about your culture and it's great. Thank you for creating such an amazing game!
Hi, watersimilar!
You're welcome and thank you for giving my game a chance and loving it! ^///^ I'm really flattered, it's the best compliment you can ever give me <3 I hope you'll also have fun with the other routes--but no rush! Read with your own pace and maybe come again to tell me what you think~
xoxo,
SweetChiel