As you may have guessed from my review on it, your first Nusantara game is one of my favorite visual novels ever (I was pestering yet another one of my friends about it moments ago, really!). I didn't notice this page because I was dumb and I didn't subscribe to your account. Actually, I didn't get a notification when you answered my review on the other game, and I've just read it right now (I've subscribed after that, and noticed the new game haha).
Anyway, enough of that... I'M SO EXCITED oh god I want to play this gaaaame!
Sorry, I got really excited there... Ahem, about the bachelors, it's the same thing as in your first game - two of them catch my attention, and the last one... not that much. But I'll give him a chance anyway! So, the ones I like are Arya and Guntur. I don't really know who's the number one - Guntur is a safe guess since he's my type of character, while Arya is more on the intriguing side. I'm so curious about the secret route now! But I don't discard Kah'lil anyway - he appeals to me more than Mitra, so it's a step up anyway.
And this time, I don't have the weird feeling about one of the sprites being inconsistent with the others. Remember, I've mentionned that about Tamara's sprite in the other game. You said it may have been because of the blue hair, but I finally figured out that it was the skin - her way lighter skin had a subtler shading and she looked more "flat" than the other characters. Here I don't see the problem anymore! I must add that the sprites look gorgeous (and the backgrounds too).
You're totally right about making it a commercial game - I'm sure it'll be worth the money, and I'll gladly purchase it!
You wouldn't even believe how much it made my day to see this game page. I'll be sure to check the Patreon often for news of all sorts.
I'm also excited -and can't wait to show you the demo but... the preparations... GOD, the WIP list is just keep getting longer the moment I touched the script :"))
I hope you will be patient until the day this game released <3 and yes, you can keep track in my patreon or in my page in forum lemmasoft ~ I keep a short log in page 1 for users to keep track x')
And thanks for explaining why Tamara look a little strange in Winged Ones! Yes, I made her skin so light -in my concept, she is very pale because she doean't spend much time outside while the avians always work outside, I should make a hint/be a better narrative next time about that kind of little detail, yes? O.O thanks for pointing that out!
You also made my day by replying and supporting my new VN! Really :"3
Thanks again and I hope to see you again in the future ~
No worries, I can wait - I understand it takes a lot of time!
Oh by the way, I've checked the Lemmasoft page, and I've noticed you asked if we'll be happy if you added a route where we can romance an antagonist... Yes, yes and YES! I love antagonist routes - these are often my favorite routes in otome and BL games!
I'm in the early stages of creating a VN too, and two antagonists are included - I really like that a lot, so it would be a shame not to do it if it's possible (not all antagonists would be good for that, of course). Though usually antagonist routes are pretty different from the "regular" routes for obvious reasons.
I don't have the title yet, since while I have the overall story and the characters and all that stuff, I still need to work on a lot of details before I can make a Lemmasoft page on it, and I don't want to think about the title before being sure of some story details.
The romanceable antagonists will be a female imp and a chicken-man - yeah, it sounds ridiculous that way, right? But they'll be serious characters with sad backstories, actually. Though they won't be the main antagonists.
If you're interested, I'll link you the Lemmasoft page once I get it!
This is just a suggestion, but how about making a mindmap of the storyline in bubbl.us? It will make things a bit easier to be organized and we'll know which details are still missing or still inneed of polishing.
But I'm sure you have your own private notebook for this :"3
And lol, they sound interesting! X'D It's not ridiculous at all! I know someone called cioccolatos(I hope I don't mistype his name lol) who made some concept art of chicken men and they're awesome! Especially if you play your cards right :"3
YES, link please later when you finally satisfied with it! I'm really interested about what kind of story you'll write!
I just started playing your other game and it was v good so I wanted to see if you made any others and- Ahhh I'm already so hyped for this. It looks so good. The plot, the characters, the art - everything. And to answer your question, I'm already unnecessarily biased towards Arya. The main reason is because he reminds me of myself, but I'd be lying if I said I wasn't a sucker for that color palette. Though I do think I'd get along with Kah'lil better.
Oh, if you don't mind me asking, about how much do you think it'll be priced?
Hahah Arya is making a great job at his first impression I see x') I'm also flattered to hear you like my palette and said my story is v good! I want to do my best to visualize my story to you after all :'D
I still have rooms for improvements tho both in my art and writing departments -but of course, I'll do my best for my readers & my own sake!
I'm still thinking about the price tho. The story will be much longer than Winged Ones and definitely a larger project so... I don't know, maybe $10 for early birds and $15 for the final price x)
I'm fine with a price like that, as long as there's a suitable amount of gameplay which I would define as 15-20 hours or ~10 hours with a high replay value. I can't speak for others, though, as standards vary quite a bit.
The gameplay duration is not definite tho since people's reading speeds are different o.o Winged ones have people finished it in around 8 hours until 3 days. How about you?
I've barely had time to play it since the end of the quarter is coming up (ㄒ^ㄒ). If that's the range, then it definitely won't take me more than twelve hours as I read really quickly. I'll tell you a more exact number when I finish. Good luck with making the game! I hope everything goes smoothly for you!
OMG YES YES YES YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS. This is what ive been waiting for . i always check on you on your deviantart and fb page and to get a notification in my email , i just go wild. QwQ
*internally praying* Please release on steam ,please release on steam, the only place i can buy game.
Ohhhh! A new game! I can't waaaaaittt! I'm kinda sad with the lack of wings, though, but since this is set in modern time, it makes sense I suppose. This sounds soooo interesting! As for the character that caught my interest... it would have to be Kah'lil. He seems like a teasing and poking fun character and I love character I can mess around with! I'm wondering, though since this is a commercial project, do you have any ideas on how you're going to sell it? Like, through this site, or maybe Steam?
The wings take too much space lol *cough* nah, I still use animal bases for the bachelors but sadly not from birds category this time xD
And don't worry the setting will be in the Goddess' alternative world. Do you see that island in the middle of the map? It's the Komodo island from Winged Ones :p I did tell you in the description that it's gonna be a brand new story set in the same alternative world but with wider horizon, didn't I? X'D
If things go well in next year's IndieGoGo, I'll consider Steam <3 but I will look for alternatives aside from this site of course.
ooooooo i called it!! i had the feeling there was going to be a new game!!! it looks promising!! I totally like the blind guy Arya, I think hes route will be quite a ride... lol Hope to see this game soon!! Cant wait!!! Maaaaaan i want to play it !! Thanks so much!!!
yep but still being a single lass you still produce good stuff with waulity and as time passes by it will be better and better!! Being part of your grow will be fun!! thank you for allowing me to enjo your stories!! hmm yep Arya even tho i dont know him i know it will be interesting .. wink wink lol.
Yay! First comment! :3 I had no idea you were so far along in development already!
What you have so far looks amazing, especially the BGs and sprites. Out of the three main bachelors, I find Arya the most intriguing at the moment, since I love quirky weirdos and he's kind of thin, which I always find super attractive for some reason. Haha... Also, his mask is pretty cool. He's got a Phantom of the Opera kind of mystique to him...
Anyway, good luck with development and I hope everything goes smoothly! I'll be cheering you on, my dear!
I still have so many things to make before advancing into making a demo tho :')) but I'm so glad you like the overall look and lol, I understand about Arya since I'm a sucker for mysterious characters too -I just hope you'll have the patience to face him :'D
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Oh. My. God.
As you may have guessed from my review on it, your first Nusantara game is one of my favorite visual novels ever (I was pestering yet another one of my friends about it moments ago, really!). I didn't notice this page because I was dumb and I didn't subscribe to your account. Actually, I didn't get a notification when you answered my review on the other game, and I've just read it right now (I've subscribed after that, and noticed the new game haha).
Anyway, enough of that... I'M SO EXCITED oh god I want to play this gaaaame!
Sorry, I got really excited there... Ahem, about the bachelors, it's the same thing as in your first game - two of them catch my attention, and the last one... not that much. But I'll give him a chance anyway! So, the ones I like are Arya and Guntur. I don't really know who's the number one - Guntur is a safe guess since he's my type of character, while Arya is more on the intriguing side. I'm so curious about the secret route now! But I don't discard Kah'lil anyway - he appeals to me more than Mitra, so it's a step up anyway.
And this time, I don't have the weird feeling about one of the sprites being inconsistent with the others. Remember, I've mentionned that about Tamara's sprite in the other game. You said it may have been because of the blue hair, but I finally figured out that it was the skin - her way lighter skin had a subtler shading and she looked more "flat" than the other characters. Here I don't see the problem anymore! I must add that the sprites look gorgeous (and the backgrounds too).
You're totally right about making it a commercial game - I'm sure it'll be worth the money, and I'll gladly purchase it!
You wouldn't even believe how much it made my day to see this game page. I'll be sure to check the Patreon often for news of all sorts.
YAY! Welcome back Konoi! X'D
I'm also excited -and can't wait to show you the demo but... the preparations... GOD, the WIP list is just keep getting longer the moment I touched the script :"))
I hope you will be patient until the day this game released <3 and yes, you can keep track in my patreon or in my page in forum lemmasoft ~ I keep a short log in page 1 for users to keep track x')
And thanks for explaining why Tamara look a little strange in Winged Ones! Yes, I made her skin so light -in my concept, she is very pale because she doean't spend much time outside while the avians always work outside, I should make a hint/be a better narrative next time about that kind of little detail, yes? O.O thanks for pointing that out!
You also made my day by replying and supporting my new VN! Really :"3
Thanks again and I hope to see you again in the future ~
Xoxo,
SweetChiel
No worries, I can wait - I understand it takes a lot of time!
Oh by the way, I've checked the Lemmasoft page, and I've noticed you asked if we'll be happy if you added a route where we can romance an antagonist... Yes, yes and YES! I love antagonist routes - these are often my favorite routes in otome and BL games!
I'm in the early stages of creating a VN too, and two antagonists are included - I really like that a lot, so it would be a shame not to do it if it's possible (not all antagonists would be good for that, of course). Though usually antagonist routes are pretty different from the "regular" routes for obvious reasons.
Oh wow! Then let's work hard together! X'D
What is your VN's title? Me wanna see the antagonists! <3 <3
We're obviously on the same boat about this :")
But first of all, I'm sorry for this ridiculously late reply, Konoi! I was busy tackling a mountain worth of workload T_T
Hey, don't worry about the late reply!
I don't have the title yet, since while I have the overall story and the characters and all that stuff, I still need to work on a lot of details before I can make a Lemmasoft page on it, and I don't want to think about the title before being sure of some story details.
The romanceable antagonists will be a female imp and a chicken-man - yeah, it sounds ridiculous that way, right? But they'll be serious characters with sad backstories, actually. Though they won't be the main antagonists.
If you're interested, I'll link you the Lemmasoft page once I get it!
That's a goood way of thinking! X'D
This is just a suggestion, but how about making a mindmap of the storyline in bubbl.us? It will make things a bit easier to be organized and we'll know which details are still missing or still inneed of polishing.
But I'm sure you have your own private notebook for this :"3
And lol, they sound interesting! X'D It's not ridiculous at all! I know someone called cioccolatos(I hope I don't mistype his name lol) who made some concept art of chicken men and they're awesome! Especially if you play your cards right :"3
YES, link please later when you finally satisfied with it! I'm really interested about what kind of story you'll write!
OMG! I love your first game, it was amazing! I can't wait for this one to come out *sigh* I just wish that I didn't have to wait so long lol.
Hi, and thanks for coming by Ashylan! X')
I also wish I can finish the 2nd one faster lol. But then again, I'll make sure the waiting is worth it >:")
See you around!
Xoxo,
SweetChiel
Hi cooljeff77!
Thank you for your support and it's okay! X')
It already means so much to me to hear you like my VN enough to buy it :")
I just started playing your other game and it was v good so I wanted to see if you made any others and- Ahhh I'm already so hyped for this. It looks so good. The plot, the characters, the art - everything. And to answer your question, I'm already unnecessarily biased towards Arya. The main reason is because he reminds me of myself, but I'd be lying if I said I wasn't a sucker for that color palette. Though I do think I'd get along with Kah'lil better.
Oh, if you don't mind me asking, about how much do you think it'll be priced?
Hi ktensei, welcome and thank you very much!
Hahah Arya is making a great job at his first impression I see x') I'm also flattered to hear you like my palette and said my story is v good! I want to do my best to visualize my story to you after all :'D
I still have rooms for improvements tho both in my art and writing departments -but of course, I'll do my best for my readers & my own sake!
I'm still thinking about the price tho. The story will be much longer than Winged Ones and definitely a larger project so... I don't know, maybe $10 for early birds and $15 for the final price x)
What do you think?
xoxo,
SweetChiel
I'm fine with a price like that, as long as there's a suitable amount of gameplay which I would define as 15-20 hours or ~10 hours with a high replay value. I can't speak for others, though, as standards vary quite a bit.
Yes I agree and plan to do so x)
The gameplay duration is not definite tho since people's reading speeds are different o.o Winged ones have people finished it in around 8 hours until 3 days. How about you?
I've barely had time to play it since the end of the quarter is coming up (ㄒ^ㄒ). If that's the range, then it definitely won't take me more than twelve hours as I read really quickly. I'll tell you a more exact number when I finish. Good luck with making the game! I hope everything goes smoothly for you!
Thanks and good luck to both of us! X')
I look forward to your review later when you finished playing :'3
OMG YES YES YES YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS. This is what ive been waiting for . i always check on you on your deviantart and fb page and to get a notification in my email , i just go wild. QwQ
*internally praying* Please release on steam ,please release on steam, the only place i can buy game.
Hi Kairu! I appreciate the enthusiasm x'D
Thank you for your support -and I will definitely consider steam if my kickstarter reached its goal next year! :'3
Ohhhh! A new game! I can't waaaaaittt! I'm kinda sad with the lack of wings, though, but since this is set in modern time, it makes sense I suppose. This sounds soooo interesting! As for the character that caught my interest... it would have to be Kah'lil. He seems like a teasing and poking fun character and I love character I can mess around with! I'm wondering, though since this is a commercial project, do you have any ideas on how you're going to sell it? Like, through this site, or maybe Steam?
It looks amazing and I can't wait to play it!
Hi abigail!
The wings take too much space lol *cough* nah, I still use animal bases for the bachelors but sadly not from birds category this time xD
And don't worry the setting will be in the Goddess' alternative world. Do you see that island in the middle of the map? It's the Komodo island from Winged Ones :p I did tell you in the description that it's gonna be a brand new story set in the same alternative world but with wider horizon, didn't I? X'D
If things go well in next year's IndieGoGo, I'll consider Steam <3 but I will look for alternatives aside from this site of course.
I hope this clears a few things <3
Xoxo,
SweetChiel
your art has gotten way better :D super hyped for this!
Thanks flawty! I'll always do my best for my dear readers :'3
Xoxo,
SweetChiel
omg i saw it in my feed and bermuda triangle?! nusantara?! /throws fist in the air/ im exciteeed <3
Me too! Hope things will go smooth all the way so I can deliver it quickly to you guys! XD
Xoxo,
SweetChiel
ooooooo i called it!! i had the feeling there was going to be a new game!!! it looks promising!! I totally like the blind guy Arya, I think hes route will be quite a ride... lol Hope to see this game soon!! Cant wait!!! Maaaaaan i want to play it !! Thanks so much!!!
Thanks jaz!
I won't stop making VNs anytime soon if I can help it xD and good choice lol, he's going to be fun to write ;)
I'll do my best to deliver it fast but there are lots of things to be done for a single lass :')) *forevercry
Stay tuned!
Xoxo,
SweetChiel
yep but still being a single lass you still produce good stuff with waulity and as time passes by it will be better and better!! Being part of your grow will be fun!! thank you for allowing me to enjo your stories!! hmm yep Arya even tho i dont know him i know it will be interesting .. wink wink lol.
yay I love u so much 😢😢 but no its going to be commercial am going to cry
Aww, sorry! as much as I want to make it free, I have bills to pay :'3
Yay! First comment! :3 I had no idea you were so far along in development already!
What you have so far looks amazing, especially the BGs and sprites. Out of the three main bachelors, I find Arya the most intriguing at the moment, since I love quirky weirdos and he's kind of thin, which I always find super attractive for some reason. Haha... Also, his mask is pretty cool. He's got a Phantom of the Opera kind of mystique to him...
Anyway, good luck with development and I hope everything goes smoothly! I'll be cheering you on, my dear!
YAY you're the first one! x'D
I still have so many things to make before advancing into making a demo tho :')) but I'm so glad you like the overall look and lol, I understand about Arya since I'm a sucker for mysterious characters too -I just hope you'll have the patience to face him :'D
Good luck for both of us! We can do this! xD
xoxo,
SweetChiel