I AM SO EXCITED!!! I played Nusantara Legend of the Winged Ones and I fell in love with the game <3<3<3<3 The quality of the artwork and the depth of the story made it one of the best I've played! After the last one I am so willing to pay for the next game!
Me too!! Gosh, Bermuda's Indiegogo campaign is TOMORROW! *bounces off the walls with excitement & worry*
I'm so happy to see more of you are coming to support Bermuda Q_Q
I've been restless & it's getting silly how I can't seem to focus on anything right now since the campaign is so close. But seeing you as excited as I am, if not more, makes me feel better x'D
Not yet ~ this one is still in progress. The demo have only been available this month for my patrons in patreon, but the demo will be available for public next month along with an Indiegogo campaign :"3
oh my god!! cant wait for this to come out >< im so hype for this, not only you can make beautiful story but you can insert some of traditional culture from Indonesia ! I'm proud of you :""
Hii !I HAD to let you know how much I love your work.
I made an account for it <3 <3
However, the legend of the winged ones is one of the best visual novels I´ve played so far. The story is amazing, each character has its own personality and they are really different from each other, I loved that because most visual novels tend to have characters that are easy to approach or they are all sweet and that is lame, in my opinion. It was nice to see three totally different personalities, each boy with a dark past, a point of view... I guess you got my point haha .
Also, Tamara´s character should be praised as well. I loved the way you created each character and how their paths were connected to each other in some way. The plot was interesting to read, I did not skip anything -which is something I usually do- and that is surprising xD
When I saw that you were working on a new piece of art (Because your games are arrrrrtttt) I almost let out a scream
I CANT WAIT TO PLAY THAT GAME OH MY GOSH
God bless you and I wish you the best with your work, you will achieve all your goals and you will become a great illustrator and artist.
<3 Lots of love <3
Thanks for coming and I'm sorry for this very late reply T_T I've been drowning myself with work and barely touched itch.io for awhile now since it's so lonely here ><
*cough*
Anyways! I'm glad to hear you like Winged Ones! Especially the characters you've passionately described :'D they're like my babies and I'm glad the world welcomed them so warmly like this <3
About the story... Tbh, I still have much to learn and polishing to do since there's still some loopholes over there I prefer not to say >////< I'll do my best to lvl up! -and of course, hopefully Bermuda will be as interesting, if not more than Winged Ones! I'm so excited with this one x'D The story is also much MUCH longer than Winged Ones... much to my dismay and happiness :')) You see, Winged Ones' demo only have 19.5k+ words while Bermuda has 48k+ words in its demo. I think I will both cry and laugh when I compare them lol...
YESS!! A new game from SweetChiel! I'll be rooting for you!! :3
Oh my... When I saw the map, Loma village and the Dead forest were considerably small as an island, this story's gonna be a long one, huh. Will Tamara be mentioned in this Visual Novel?
Good luck with your new game, I'm expecting a lot since I really loved Nusantara!
Congrats! Finally, someone pointed out the island in the middle is from Winged Ones! x'D
Yup, this one will be a lot longer than last one, I dunno whether to cry or laugh about this :")) The demo will be a long one too since there are a lot of new elements to introduce. There also will be cameos for a few characters but not all. I hope you'll be waiting patiently for it! ><
And... thanks for loving Nusantara >\\\< I'm always happy to hear someone loves my 'child' as much if not more than me :"D I'll definitely do my best to meet your expectations!
just wondering, will the voice acting be in english or Indonesian since you're Indonesian, pardon me if I'm wrong~
X333
well, if you were planning on making it voiced, I wanted to give my opinion on that, umm, y'know, maybe make the voice acting in Indonesian but the text in english~
X333
so, there's originality in it or something like that~
Hi Ayuni! Thanks for visiting and I'm so sorry for being late! I was busy tackling a mountain of workloads T.T
As for the voice acting, yes I was also thinking about looking for an indonesian voice actor, and I have been contacted by what seemed to be a VA association but I have my doubts since... I haven't met/heard a good indonesian voice actor Q_Q
But take note that I want to use partial voice acting like Fire Emblem so it might work! Just pray with me! ><
As for the similarity of Guntur with Purba; maybe because both are muscular + the red highlights on their hair x'D
But a lot of people mentioned on Kah'lil's design hahahah; must be because I like Jiyeon so much that I unconciously picked his color palettes? x.x But don't worry, even if there will be some character similarities, he is not Jiyeon x')
Again, thanks for your support! I hope to see you again in the future, maybe after the demo is out you'll write your thoughts for me? :"3
like, really really late reply~! Just started college and ze first module for my engineering course lolz (literally dying right here XD)
XDDD
wow, voice acting～！Man, I hope things works out~!!! lolz, I am so in love with Guntur...It might just be love at first sight (maybe 'coz he reminded me of Purba...why he mesmerized me so much is something I have yet to unravel lolz)~
lolz, the first thing that I did after reaching my house (after taking a taxi, riding a commuter and bus for 6 hours) was downloading and playing the demo and I must say, I'm intrigued~! (I was practically internally screaming lolz...) hahahahaha...
*.*)/
and lolz I can't believe how funny the first meeting (like first time interaction lolz) with the guys are~!
omggggg, like being insulted and saw a fugitive climbing my fence~
lolz that was awesomez~
that's definitely different~
O.o)/
@.@)/ me likey~
XDDD
welp, I have nu idea what to say next, so I'll end it here...hahaha...
Its been a while since I've checked this site again and I see this!! Im so excited! I knew that I just had to make an account and comment on this! Hahaha! Never really thought about making an account before. But seriously! I had to let you know that Nusantara: Legend of the Winged ones is one of my favorite! I literally had to make my friends play it! And since im on break now from the university, im looking for games to play again. I really love your work! Its not only fun, a stress reliever but also educational :)
Im looking forward to playing this! Supporting you all the way! Fighting SweetChiel! :)
Whoa sorry for this very late reply! I was busy tackling a mountain of workloads O.O;;
I'm so touched to see that you made an account just to comment on this T^T Ack! Now I feel really bad for replying so late... OTL
But really, I'm happy to hear you love Winged Ones and love my work QuQ
Bermuda will be a lot longer than Winged Ones so I hope you can wait patiently for me >< I'm having a little problem with arranging the first chapters since there are a lot of new elements to be introduced.
Thanks again KimYuuki for your warm support and love :"D I hope to see you again in the future!
Hahahahaha! No problem! Sorry if my reply is late too! I've been super busy but I check this from time to time hahaha! Good Luck on those workloads! But don't stress yourself too much! Make sure to rest too! :)
I update every Monday in lemmasoft forum or my facebook fanpage if you're interested to see how it's progressing! I see that both of us have our hands full with work :'D Good luck to both of us and thanks for coming again! >////<
As you may have guessed from my review on it, your first Nusantara game is one of my favorite visual novels ever (I was pestering yet another one of my friends about it moments ago, really!). I didn't notice this page because I was dumb and I didn't subscribe to your account. Actually, I didn't get a notification when you answered my review on the other game, and I've just read it right now (I've subscribed after that, and noticed the new game haha).
Anyway, enough of that... I'M SO EXCITED oh god I want to play this gaaaame!
Sorry, I got really excited there... Ahem, about the bachelors, it's the same thing as in your first game - two of them catch my attention, and the last one... not that much. But I'll give him a chance anyway! So, the ones I like are Arya and Guntur. I don't really know who's the number one - Guntur is a safe guess since he's my type of character, while Arya is more on the intriguing side. I'm so curious about the secret route now! But I don't discard Kah'lil anyway - he appeals to me more than Mitra, so it's a step up anyway.
And this time, I don't have the weird feeling about one of the sprites being inconsistent with the others. Remember, I've mentionned that about Tamara's sprite in the other game. You said it may have been because of the blue hair, but I finally figured out that it was the skin - her way lighter skin had a subtler shading and she looked more "flat" than the other characters. Here I don't see the problem anymore! I must add that the sprites look gorgeous (and the backgrounds too).
You're totally right about making it a commercial game - I'm sure it'll be worth the money, and I'll gladly purchase it!
You wouldn't even believe how much it made my day to see this game page. I'll be sure to check the Patreon often for news of all sorts.
I'm also excited -and can't wait to show you the demo but... the preparations... GOD, the WIP list is just keep getting longer the moment I touched the script :"))
I hope you will be patient until the day this game released <3 and yes, you can keep track in my patreon or in my page in forum lemmasoft ~ I keep a short log in page 1 for users to keep track x')
And thanks for explaining why Tamara look a little strange in Winged Ones! Yes, I made her skin so light -in my concept, she is very pale because she doean't spend much time outside while the avians always work outside, I should make a hint/be a better narrative next time about that kind of little detail, yes? O.O thanks for pointing that out!
You also made my day by replying and supporting my new VN! Really :"3
Thanks again and I hope to see you again in the future ~
No worries, I can wait - I understand it takes a lot of time!
Oh by the way, I've checked the Lemmasoft page, and I've noticed you asked if we'll be happy if you added a route where we can romance an antagonist... Yes, yes and YES! I love antagonist routes - these are often my favorite routes in otome and BL games!
I'm in the early stages of creating a VN too, and two antagonists are included - I really like that a lot, so it would be a shame not to do it if it's possible (not all antagonists would be good for that, of course). Though usually antagonist routes are pretty different from the "regular" routes for obvious reasons.
I don't have the title yet, since while I have the overall story and the characters and all that stuff, I still need to work on a lot of details before I can make a Lemmasoft page on it, and I don't want to think about the title before being sure of some story details.
The romanceable antagonists will be a female imp and a chicken-man - yeah, it sounds ridiculous that way, right? But they'll be serious characters with sad backstories, actually. Though they won't be the main antagonists.
If you're interested, I'll link you the Lemmasoft page once I get it!
This is just a suggestion, but how about making a mindmap of the storyline in bubbl.us? It will make things a bit easier to be organized and we'll know which details are still missing or still inneed of polishing.
But I'm sure you have your own private notebook for this :"3
And lol, they sound interesting! X'D It's not ridiculous at all! I know someone called cioccolatos(I hope I don't mistype his name lol) who made some concept art of chicken men and they're awesome! Especially if you play your cards right :"3
YES, link please later when you finally satisfied with it! I'm really interested about what kind of story you'll write!
I just started playing your other game and it was v good so I wanted to see if you made any others and- Ahhh I'm already so hyped for this. It looks so good. The plot, the characters, the art - everything. And to answer your question, I'm already unnecessarily biased towards Arya. The main reason is because he reminds me of myself, but I'd be lying if I said I wasn't a sucker for that color palette. Though I do think I'd get along with Kah'lil better.
Oh, if you don't mind me asking, about how much do you think it'll be priced?
Hahah Arya is making a great job at his first impression I see x') I'm also flattered to hear you like my palette and said my story is v good! I want to do my best to visualize my story to you after all :'D
I still have rooms for improvements tho both in my art and writing departments -but of course, I'll do my best for my readers & my own sake!
I'm still thinking about the price tho. The story will be much longer than Winged Ones and definitely a larger project so... I don't know, maybe $10 for early birds and $15 for the final price x)
I'm fine with a price like that, as long as there's a suitable amount of gameplay which I would define as 15-20 hours or ~10 hours with a high replay value. I can't speak for others, though, as standards vary quite a bit.
The gameplay duration is not definite tho since people's reading speeds are different o.o Winged ones have people finished it in around 8 hours until 3 days. How about you?
I've barely had time to play it since the end of the quarter is coming up (ㄒ^ㄒ). If that's the range, then it definitely won't take me more than twelve hours as I read really quickly. I'll tell you a more exact number when I finish. Good luck with making the game! I hope everything goes smoothly for you!
OMG YES YES YES YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS. This is what ive been waiting for . i always check on you on your deviantart and fb page and to get a notification in my email , i just go wild. QwQ
*internally praying* Please release on steam ,please release on steam, the only place i can buy game.
Ohhhh! A new game! I can't waaaaaittt! I'm kinda sad with the lack of wings, though, but since this is set in modern time, it makes sense I suppose. This sounds soooo interesting! As for the character that caught my interest... it would have to be Kah'lil. He seems like a teasing and poking fun character and I love character I can mess around with! I'm wondering, though since this is a commercial project, do you have any ideas on how you're going to sell it? Like, through this site, or maybe Steam?
The wings take too much space lol *cough* nah, I still use animal bases for the bachelors but sadly not from birds category this time xD
And don't worry the setting will be in the Goddess' alternative world. Do you see that island in the middle of the map? It's the Komodo island from Winged Ones :p I did tell you in the description that it's gonna be a brand new story set in the same alternative world but with wider horizon, didn't I? X'D
If things go well in next year's IndieGoGo, I'll consider Steam <3 but I will look for alternatives aside from this site of course.
ooooooo i called it!! i had the feeling there was going to be a new game!!! it looks promising!! I totally like the blind guy Arya, I think hes route will be quite a ride... lol Hope to see this game soon!! Cant wait!!! Maaaaaan i want to play it !! Thanks so much!!!
yep but still being a single lass you still produce good stuff with waulity and as time passes by it will be better and better!! Being part of your grow will be fun!! thank you for allowing me to enjo your stories!! hmm yep Arya even tho i dont know him i know it will be interesting .. wink wink lol.
Yay! First comment! :3 I had no idea you were so far along in development already!
What you have so far looks amazing, especially the BGs and sprites. Out of the three main bachelors, I find Arya the most intriguing at the moment, since I love quirky weirdos and he's kind of thin, which I always find super attractive for some reason. Haha... Also, his mask is pretty cool. He's got a Phantom of the Opera kind of mystique to him...
Anyway, good luck with development and I hope everything goes smoothly! I'll be cheering you on, my dear!
I still have so many things to make before advancing into making a demo tho :')) but I'm so glad you like the overall look and lol, I understand about Arya since I'm a sucker for mysterious characters too -I just hope you'll have the patience to face him :'D
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I AM SO EXCITED!!! I played Nusantara Legend of the Winged Ones and I fell in love with the game <3<3<3<3 The quality of the artwork and the depth of the story made it one of the best I've played! After the last one I am so willing to pay for the next game!
Me too!! Gosh, Bermuda's Indiegogo campaign is TOMORROW! *bounces off the walls with excitement & worry*
I'm so happy to see more of you are coming to support Bermuda Q_Q
I've been restless & it's getting silly how I can't seem to focus on anything right now since the campaign is so close. But seeing you as excited as I am, if not more, makes me feel better x'D
Thank you and see you soon, QueenMak!
xoxo,
SweetChiel
Let me pre-order here,please!
*throw money at screen*
Hi, Violette! Early birds will be available in my IndieGoGo next month lol so make sure to stay tuned x'D
You made my day first thing in the morning!
When is the release? Anyone? I love you SweetChiel! <3 You're amazing.
Hi yohanlove!
Not yet ~ this one is still in progress. The demo have only been available this month for my patrons in patreon, but the demo will be available for public next month along with an Indiegogo campaign :"3
My updates could be seen in lemmasoft forum/facebook fanpage while more sneak peeks can be seen in my Patreon <3
Aah I'm so happy more people is anticipating this! :'D
Stay tuned!
Xoxo, SweetChiel
Can't wait for this to be out. c:
Me too! So excited for my 2nd child! :'D
Looks like this is going to be a good one, I am pretty hyped for it!
Me too!
I can't wait to hear your thoughts after playing the demo :'D soon <3
Wait sweetChiel will it be available on mac?
Yup! Definitely!
yay XD
oh my god!! cant wait for this to come out >< im so hype for this, not only you can make beautiful story but you can insert some of traditional culture from Indonesia ! I'm proud of you :""
Hi, Skoren!
It will take awhile until this one came out x'D I'm planning to try IndieGoGo with this little one.
I'm updating every Monday at Lemmasoft Forum & Facebook fanpage if you're interested in the progress :'3
i ADORED Nusantara Legend of the Winged Ones, so i'm super excited for this :'D i'm sure it'll be just,if not more amazing~
Thanks CobaltTea >///< your trust in my skill flatters me :'D
I will do my best to meet your expectations!
Yo yo yo
So like
I just played Nusantara: Legend of the Winged Ones
and
yeah since I loved that
I know I'm going to love this <3
Thank you for the support, mshen19!
I'm very happy to hear you like the Winged Ones! :'D
What? I'm not excited. You are.
Aww you're not? I definitely am excited! xD
Hi Zero for Conduct!
Thanks for coming and I'm sorry for this very late reply T_T I've been drowning myself with work and barely touched itch.io for awhile now since it's so lonely here ><
*cough*
Anyways! I'm glad to hear you like Winged Ones! Especially the characters you've passionately described :'D they're like my babies and I'm glad the world welcomed them so warmly like this <3
About the story... Tbh, I still have much to learn and polishing to do since there's still some loopholes over there I prefer not to say >////< I'll do my best to lvl up! -and of course, hopefully Bermuda will be as interesting, if not more than Winged Ones! I'm so excited with this one x'D
The story is also much MUCH longer than Winged Ones... much to my dismay and happiness :')) You see, Winged Ones' demo only have 19.5k+ words while Bermuda has 48k+ words in its demo. I think I will both cry and laugh when I compare them lol...
I update every Monday at my facebook fanpage and lemmasoft forum if you're still interested!
xoxo,
SweetChiel
Cant wait. Rooting for you!
Thanks! I'll do my best to deliver it! :"3
YESS!! A new game from SweetChiel! I'll be rooting for you!! :3
Oh my... When I saw the map, Loma village and the Dead forest were considerably small as an island, this story's gonna be a long one, huh. Will Tamara be mentioned in this Visual Novel?
Good luck with your new game, I'm expecting a lot since I really loved Nusantara!
Hi NeruOrdisi!
Congrats! Finally, someone pointed out the island in the middle is from Winged Ones! x'D
Yup, this one will be a lot longer than last one, I dunno whether to cry or laugh about this :")) The demo will be a long one too since there are a lot of new elements to introduce. There also will be cameos for a few characters but not all. I hope you'll be waiting patiently for it! ><
And... thanks for loving Nusantara >\\\< I'm always happy to hear someone loves my 'child' as much if not more than me :"D I'll definitely do my best to meet your expectations!
Xoxo,
SweetChiel
I'm looking forward to it!
Thank you for the patience, NeruOrdisi!
hi hi~
X333
just wondering, will the voice acting be in english or Indonesian since you're Indonesian, pardon me if I'm wrong~
X333
well, if you were planning on making it voiced, I wanted to give my opinion on that, umm, y'know, maybe make the voice acting in Indonesian but the text in english~
X333
so, there's originality in it or something like that~
^.^)/
welp, I hope you can consider it~
hmm, Kah'lil looks a lot like Jiyeon from Dandelion~wishes brought to you~
X333
and Guntur looks a lot like Purba~
X333
*q*
Immas drooling~
>.>
forgive me n my insolent self~
I have a thing for guys with that kinda looks~
X333
Hi Ayuni! Thanks for visiting and I'm so sorry for being late! I was busy tackling a mountain of workloads T.T
As for the voice acting, yes I was also thinking about looking for an indonesian voice actor, and I have been contacted by what seemed to be a VA association but I have my doubts since... I haven't met/heard a good indonesian voice actor Q_Q
But take note that I want to use partial voice acting like Fire Emblem so it might work! Just pray with me! ><
As for the similarity of Guntur with Purba; maybe because both are muscular + the red highlights on their hair x'D
But a lot of people mentioned on Kah'lil's design hahahah; must be because I like Jiyeon so much that I unconciously picked his color palettes? x.x But don't worry, even if there will be some character similarities, he is not Jiyeon x')
Again, thanks for your support! I hope to see you again in the future, maybe after the demo is out you'll write your thoughts for me? :"3
Xoxo,
SweetChiel
lolz
XDDD
heyyyy~
sorry for the late reply lolz
like, really really late reply~! Just started college and ze first module for my engineering course lolz (literally dying right here XD)
XDDD
wow, voice acting～！Man, I hope things works out~!!! lolz, I am so in love with Guntur...It might just be love at first sight (maybe 'coz he reminded me of Purba...why he mesmerized me so much is something I have yet to unravel lolz)~
lolz, the first thing that I did after reaching my house (after taking a taxi, riding a commuter and bus for 6 hours) was downloading and playing the demo and I must say, I'm intrigued~! (I was practically internally screaming lolz...) hahahahaha...
*.*)/
and lolz I can't believe how funny the first meeting (like first time interaction lolz) with the guys are~!
omggggg, like being insulted and saw a fugitive climbing my fence~
lolz that was awesomez~
that's definitely different~
O.o)/
@.@)/ me likey~
XDDD
welp, I have nu idea what to say next, so I'll end it here...hahaha...
can't wait to see the final product lolz~
keep up the good work~!
^3^)/
WAAH!! I CANT WAIT FOR THIS!
Its been a while since I've checked this site again and I see this!! Im so excited! I knew that I just had to make an account and comment on this! Hahaha! Never really thought about making an account before. But seriously! I had to let you know that Nusantara: Legend of the Winged ones is one of my favorite! I literally had to make my friends play it! And since im on break now from the university, im looking for games to play again. I really love your work! Its not only fun, a stress reliever but also educational :)
Im looking forward to playing this! Supporting you all the way! Fighting SweetChiel! :)
Hi KimYuuki!
Whoa sorry for this very late reply! I was busy tackling a mountain of workloads O.O;;
I'm so touched to see that you made an account just to comment on this T^T Ack! Now I feel really bad for replying so late... OTL
But really, I'm happy to hear you love Winged Ones and love my work QuQ
Bermuda will be a lot longer than Winged Ones so I hope you can wait patiently for me >< I'm having a little problem with arranging the first chapters since there are a lot of new elements to be introduced.
Thanks again KimYuuki for your warm support and love :"D I hope to see you again in the future!
Xoxo,
SweetChiel
Hahahahaha! No problem! Sorry if my reply is late too! I've been super busy but I check this from time to time hahaha! Good Luck on those workloads! But don't stress yourself too much! Make sure to rest too! :)
I promise to support you all the way! ^^
No problem at all hahahah x'D
I update every Monday in lemmasoft forum or my facebook fanpage if you're interested to see how it's progressing! I see that both of us have our hands full with work :'D Good luck to both of us and thanks for coming again! >////<
I'll check on those too!! Thanks! :) <3 <3 <3
Oh. My. God.
As you may have guessed from my review on it, your first Nusantara game is one of my favorite visual novels ever (I was pestering yet another one of my friends about it moments ago, really!). I didn't notice this page because I was dumb and I didn't subscribe to your account. Actually, I didn't get a notification when you answered my review on the other game, and I've just read it right now (I've subscribed after that, and noticed the new game haha).
Anyway, enough of that... I'M SO EXCITED oh god I want to play this gaaaame!
Sorry, I got really excited there... Ahem, about the bachelors, it's the same thing as in your first game - two of them catch my attention, and the last one... not that much. But I'll give him a chance anyway! So, the ones I like are Arya and Guntur. I don't really know who's the number one - Guntur is a safe guess since he's my type of character, while Arya is more on the intriguing side. I'm so curious about the secret route now! But I don't discard Kah'lil anyway - he appeals to me more than Mitra, so it's a step up anyway.
And this time, I don't have the weird feeling about one of the sprites being inconsistent with the others. Remember, I've mentionned that about Tamara's sprite in the other game. You said it may have been because of the blue hair, but I finally figured out that it was the skin - her way lighter skin had a subtler shading and she looked more "flat" than the other characters. Here I don't see the problem anymore! I must add that the sprites look gorgeous (and the backgrounds too).
You're totally right about making it a commercial game - I'm sure it'll be worth the money, and I'll gladly purchase it!
You wouldn't even believe how much it made my day to see this game page. I'll be sure to check the Patreon often for news of all sorts.
YAY! Welcome back Konoi! X'D
I'm also excited -and can't wait to show you the demo but... the preparations... GOD, the WIP list is just keep getting longer the moment I touched the script :"))
I hope you will be patient until the day this game released <3 and yes, you can keep track in my patreon or in my page in forum lemmasoft ~ I keep a short log in page 1 for users to keep track x')
And thanks for explaining why Tamara look a little strange in Winged Ones! Yes, I made her skin so light -in my concept, she is very pale because she doean't spend much time outside while the avians always work outside, I should make a hint/be a better narrative next time about that kind of little detail, yes? O.O thanks for pointing that out!
You also made my day by replying and supporting my new VN! Really :"3
Thanks again and I hope to see you again in the future ~
Xoxo,
SweetChiel
No worries, I can wait - I understand it takes a lot of time!
Oh by the way, I've checked the Lemmasoft page, and I've noticed you asked if we'll be happy if you added a route where we can romance an antagonist... Yes, yes and YES! I love antagonist routes - these are often my favorite routes in otome and BL games!
I'm in the early stages of creating a VN too, and two antagonists are included - I really like that a lot, so it would be a shame not to do it if it's possible (not all antagonists would be good for that, of course). Though usually antagonist routes are pretty different from the "regular" routes for obvious reasons.
Oh wow! Then let's work hard together! X'D
What is your VN's title? Me wanna see the antagonists! <3 <3
We're obviously on the same boat about this :")
But first of all, I'm sorry for this ridiculously late reply, Konoi! I was busy tackling a mountain worth of workload T_T
Hey, don't worry about the late reply!
I don't have the title yet, since while I have the overall story and the characters and all that stuff, I still need to work on a lot of details before I can make a Lemmasoft page on it, and I don't want to think about the title before being sure of some story details.
The romanceable antagonists will be a female imp and a chicken-man - yeah, it sounds ridiculous that way, right? But they'll be serious characters with sad backstories, actually. Though they won't be the main antagonists.
If you're interested, I'll link you the Lemmasoft page once I get it!
That's a goood way of thinking! X'D
This is just a suggestion, but how about making a mindmap of the storyline in bubbl.us? It will make things a bit easier to be organized and we'll know which details are still missing or still inneed of polishing.
But I'm sure you have your own private notebook for this :"3
And lol, they sound interesting! X'D It's not ridiculous at all! I know someone called cioccolatos(I hope I don't mistype his name lol) who made some concept art of chicken men and they're awesome! Especially if you play your cards right :"3
YES, link please later when you finally satisfied with it! I'm really interested about what kind of story you'll write!
OMG! I love your first game, it was amazing! I can't wait for this one to come out *sigh* I just wish that I didn't have to wait so long lol.
Hi, and thanks for coming by Ashylan! X')
I also wish I can finish the 2nd one faster lol. But then again, I'll make sure the waiting is worth it >:")
See you around!
Xoxo,
SweetChiel
Hi cooljeff77!
Thank you for your support and it's okay! X')
It already means so much to me to hear you like my VN enough to buy it :")
I just started playing your other game and it was v good so I wanted to see if you made any others and- Ahhh I'm already so hyped for this. It looks so good. The plot, the characters, the art - everything. And to answer your question, I'm already unnecessarily biased towards Arya. The main reason is because he reminds me of myself, but I'd be lying if I said I wasn't a sucker for that color palette. Though I do think I'd get along with Kah'lil better.
Oh, if you don't mind me asking, about how much do you think it'll be priced?
Hi ktensei, welcome and thank you very much!
Hahah Arya is making a great job at his first impression I see x') I'm also flattered to hear you like my palette and said my story is v good! I want to do my best to visualize my story to you after all :'D
I still have rooms for improvements tho both in my art and writing departments -but of course, I'll do my best for my readers & my own sake!
I'm still thinking about the price tho. The story will be much longer than Winged Ones and definitely a larger project so... I don't know, maybe $10 for early birds and $15 for the final price x)
What do you think?
xoxo,
SweetChiel
I'm fine with a price like that, as long as there's a suitable amount of gameplay which I would define as 15-20 hours or ~10 hours with a high replay value. I can't speak for others, though, as standards vary quite a bit.
Yes I agree and plan to do so x)
The gameplay duration is not definite tho since people's reading speeds are different o.o Winged ones have people finished it in around 8 hours until 3 days. How about you?
I've barely had time to play it since the end of the quarter is coming up (ㄒ^ㄒ). If that's the range, then it definitely won't take me more than twelve hours as I read really quickly. I'll tell you a more exact number when I finish. Good luck with making the game! I hope everything goes smoothly for you!
Thanks and good luck to both of us! X')
I look forward to your review later when you finished playing :'3
OMG YES YES YES YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS. This is what ive been waiting for . i always check on you on your deviantart and fb page and to get a notification in my email , i just go wild. QwQ
*internally praying* Please release on steam ,please release on steam, the only place i can buy game.
Hi Kairu! I appreciate the enthusiasm x'D
Thank you for your support -and I will definitely consider steam if my kickstarter reached its goal next year! :'3
Ohhhh! A new game! I can't waaaaaittt! I'm kinda sad with the lack of wings, though, but since this is set in modern time, it makes sense I suppose. This sounds soooo interesting! As for the character that caught my interest... it would have to be Kah'lil. He seems like a teasing and poking fun character and I love character I can mess around with! I'm wondering, though since this is a commercial project, do you have any ideas on how you're going to sell it? Like, through this site, or maybe Steam?
It looks amazing and I can't wait to play it!
Hi abigail!
The wings take too much space lol *cough* nah, I still use animal bases for the bachelors but sadly not from birds category this time xD
And don't worry the setting will be in the Goddess' alternative world. Do you see that island in the middle of the map? It's the Komodo island from Winged Ones :p I did tell you in the description that it's gonna be a brand new story set in the same alternative world but with wider horizon, didn't I? X'D
If things go well in next year's IndieGoGo, I'll consider Steam <3 but I will look for alternatives aside from this site of course.
I hope this clears a few things <3
Xoxo,
SweetChiel
your art has gotten way better :D super hyped for this!
Thanks flawty! I'll always do my best for my dear readers :'3
Xoxo,
SweetChiel
omg i saw it in my feed and bermuda triangle?! nusantara?! /throws fist in the air/ im exciteeed <3
Me too! Hope things will go smooth all the way so I can deliver it quickly to you guys! XD
Xoxo,
SweetChiel
ooooooo i called it!! i had the feeling there was going to be a new game!!! it looks promising!! I totally like the blind guy Arya, I think hes route will be quite a ride... lol Hope to see this game soon!! Cant wait!!! Maaaaaan i want to play it !! Thanks so much!!!
Thanks jaz!
I won't stop making VNs anytime soon if I can help it xD and good choice lol, he's going to be fun to write ;)
I'll do my best to deliver it fast but there are lots of things to be done for a single lass :')) *forevercry
Stay tuned!
Xoxo,
SweetChiel
yep but still being a single lass you still produce good stuff with waulity and as time passes by it will be better and better!! Being part of your grow will be fun!! thank you for allowing me to enjo your stories!! hmm yep Arya even tho i dont know him i know it will be interesting .. wink wink lol.
yay I love u so much 😢😢 but no its going to be commercial am going to cry
Aww, sorry! as much as I want to make it free, I have bills to pay :'3
Yay! First comment! :3 I had no idea you were so far along in development already!
What you have so far looks amazing, especially the BGs and sprites. Out of the three main bachelors, I find Arya the most intriguing at the moment, since I love quirky weirdos and he's kind of thin, which I always find super attractive for some reason. Haha... Also, his mask is pretty cool. He's got a Phantom of the Opera kind of mystique to him...
Anyway, good luck with development and I hope everything goes smoothly! I'll be cheering you on, my dear!
YAY you're the first one! x'D
I still have so many things to make before advancing into making a demo tho :')) but I'm so glad you like the overall look and lol, I understand about Arya since I'm a sucker for mysterious characters too -I just hope you'll have the patience to face him :'D
Good luck for both of us! We can do this! xD
xoxo,
SweetChiel